See no evil,
hear no evil, speak no evil
Rio De Janeiro, Brazil
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The moon seemed to pulsate
with a minacious aura, yet managed to retain its lustrous lineament as the
forest ground was incandesced and thus lent an eerie ambiance. The forest had
become peculiarly silent as all life form had ceased all activities. But
crouched low and peering through the thick vegetation, was a frightened lad who
could glimpse the fleeting motility of the dark shadows in the clearing. He
couldn't tell what they were, only that they had an ominous appetite for blood,
possessed blood red eyes, razor sharp claws and a foul lingering fetor that
oozed out of their obscure form.
Suddenly, the movements of
the dark creatures ceased. Desperately willing his pounding heart to be silent,
he watched as they paused in their steps, examined the sky before they all
turned and focused their horrible red eyes on his position. His heart literally
stopped beating for he was certain that his end was nigh. But to his greatest shock,
they slowly withdrew into the trees and disappeared. He needed no further
incitement as he shot out from where he'd been hiding and made for the bushy
trail that would take him back to the carnival ground. He kept on running, not
once daring to look behind, not even when the sound of chasing feet and
rustling bushes, ruled the canvas of ghoulish imaginations inside his head.
He was convinced that they
were giving chase. He was certain that they would catch up with him because
their limbs were longer, stretching farther and covered double the distance his
legs covered in one stride. Also, their reddish eyes which glowed like the pits
of hell would definitely see better in this black chasm that ruled the night.
He promised that if he survived, he would never disobey his mother again. He
would even follow her to service every Sunday and sit with her in the front
pew. Heck, he would even agree to marry the buck-toothed Maria Da' Silva to
sweeten the deal.
What he
never considered as the chronological succession of event which led to his
nightmarish experience replayed in his head, was that it was the time which
struck midnight, therefore bringing forth a new day and thus an end to the
creatures pagan ceremony, that had saved his life.
*************
Earlier in the evening
All Jose Barbosa thought about as he hurriedly fed the
chickens was the Christmas carnival he was going to attend later. He was
ashamed to admit that he'd never attended one before. His mother was a devoted
and good woman who was overly protective of him and irrational about certain
things she forbids, like the Christmas carnival for instance. She claimed that
grave transgressions occurred during the festivals that were unforgivable and
would forever doom one's soul. She also claimed that the youths in the town
used it to perform immoral acts that no God fearing child should ever indulge
in.
She had a point there because all his friends had lost
their virginity on this Christmas carnivals. Amongst his peers, he was the only
virgin and they never let him forget it, especially his best friend Lucio
Azevedo whose father, like Jose's mother, was a devout Christian. Also, Lucio's
father had taken a liking to his mother and it seemed like they would get
married, a fact he and Lucio seemed indifferent about.
Jose loved his mother dearly because she was the only
family he'd had since his father had abandoned them. All he could remember of
his father was that he was a violent drunk whom his mother never stopped
loving, even till date. If there were any happy moments they had together as a
family, they must be buried in the deepest recess of his memories. If he ever
missed the significance of a fatherly figure in his life, it would be so hard
to know now for Jose seemed to have beaten the odds by turning out good. He was
the pride of his mother and community, the brightest in his class and every
mother in the community's ideal image of a husband for their daughter.
But all that were furthest from Jose's mind as he felt
damnation of the soul was worth every ounce, if all the stories his friends
told him about the Christmas carnival were anything to go by. Moreover, he was
tired of being called the mother's boy at eighteen or branded the kid amongst
his friends because he hadn't "Busted a cherry". So with the help of
Lucio, he was going to sneak out of the house tonight. He was finally going to
prove to them that he was a man.
After his mother had gone to bed that night, he sneaked
out of the house and went to the carnival. The carnival was all Jose had dreamt
about and much more. The fanfare, the costumes, the dance, the food, drinks and
finally, the girls were so explosive. It was as though he had been blind all
his life and he silently cursed his mother for shielding him. He felt like a
feral animal that had been caged all its life, but was now suddenly unleashed
into the beauty of the wilderness. He was lost in a world he never had the
slightest knowledge existed, and he was enjoying every bit of it. The night
then got better as he and Lucio were suddenly ambushed by two giggling girls.
The girls teased as though they'd had one too many to drink and before Jose
could blink an eyelid he was already been sequestered away as one of the girls
took his arm and dragged him towards the thicket. A little panicked, Jose
looked towards Lucio for help but all Lucio did was to wink at him as he too
was dragged away. Resigned to his blissful faith, he told himself that the
worse that could happen would be him forfeiting his chastity. How very wrong he
had been.
Once within the privacy of the thicket, the girl grabbed
his crotch and squeezed. He was shocked beyond imagination by the girl's
unabashed temerity, but his betraying crotch welcomed it with immense pleasure
as it grew in considerable proportion. So he grabbed her by the bum and began
to kiss her but she gently pushed him away, whispered teasingly in his ear
before running into the night giggling. Fifteen minutes later and out of
breath, he caught up with her and they both tumbled to the floor kissing as they
fumbled to get off their clothing. Once their clothing's had been discarded,
the girl spread her legs wide and began to direct him into her. Jose felt
excitement coarse through his body as he shook in urgency but as he was about
to penetrate, they heard a loud chant which was followed by a scream.
As they quickly disentangled to investigate the source
of the screaming, Jose cursed his bloody luck as he was dead sure that, even in
sleep, his mother was making sure he preserved his chastity. They crept quietly
to investigate the source of the chant and a few meters away, they came across
a mass in dark cowls. They were gathered around an altar and on it was a
terrified girl who was stripped completely of any form of clothing. With
trembling hands, Jose quickly covered the girl's mouth as a low whimper almost
escaped her. Too scared to move, they both watched as the pagan black mass
chanted and went about their unholy ceremony. When the chanting finally
stopped, one of them walked towards the altar. He was as silent as death; no!
He was death for as he got to the altar, he effortlessly lifted the girl and
slit her throat from ear to ear.
Shocked beyond mobility, Jose
watched as he drained her blood with a chalice that mysteriously appeared in
his hand. After he finished draining her blood, he then removed his cowl and
gleefully drank her blood. When Jose caught a glimpse of the heinous face
behind the cowl, his breath caught and his heart stopped beating as something
worse than terror slowly stole in. As his mind painstakingly tried to process
what his eyes had seen, a tiny whimper of futility escaped him.
As his whimper carried into their gathering, they all swiftly turned in unison
and laid piercing eyes that glowed red like beacons, in their direction.
Jose so badly wanted to
scream, he tried, but all he could manage was a whizzing for their eyes had
held him a captive to their whim. The black mass began to glide towards them
with their arms spread wide, as thought reaching for them with the hunger of a
welcoming lover and Jose would have remained that way, had the girl not bitten
his fingers in desperation. The pain jarred him back to his senses and they
both took flight. Behind them, they heard a guttural wail of anger and the
cackling of bones as the black mass changed form and gave chase.
***************
Jose woke up screaming. Absolute terror that he was
impotent to quell, washed over him as thought a bucket full of warm blood had
been doused on him. The torture of reliving the horror in his sleeping hours
saddened and weakened him to the point of despair. It's been five and half
years since the experience but not a night goes by, that he didn't relive it.
Every night, he went to bed believing it would be different but as soon as he
falls asleep, the nightmares would come crashing like a tidal wave.
He'd been told that he'd gotten home naked, bloodied,
dirty and in a near catatonic state that night. But by morning, he'd recovered
from the shock but he still wasn't speaking, even after five years, the once
garrulous lad still couldn't bring himself to talk much. He was now gaunt from
worry and till this day, remains a virgin but he isn't complaining. The effect
of terror was ever prominent in all his activities as he feared all human
contact. To his petrified soul, anyone could have been those creatures he saw
that night. They all claimed he was paranoid but he knew they were close by and
watching, waiting for him to slip. Most night, he could smell them when the
wind blew towards his window, while on some nights, he could feel their eyes
scrutinizing his ever action.
Evil had
been invited into his home
He now had a haunted look,
which led most people to think he'd lost his marbles and maybe he had. But does
watching creatures tear a girl limb for limb not give him justifiable reason
for losing his marbles? His friends, especially Lucio tried to get him to snap
out of his dread but he shied away from them because he didn't trust them.
Despite the fact that his mother and Lucio's father were now married, irrevocably
making them step brothers, he still couldn't trust him. Most thought the bases
for his fear were misplaced but they knew not what his eyes had witnessed. They
knew not the terror his heart had experienced and for that, they should be
grateful. They knew not evil and therefore will suspect none, for that they
should feel blessed.
Three days after his terrifying encounter with the
unknown, he received a package. There was this ominous feeling of dread as he
opened the package with shaky hands. Somehow he knew it was them, he just knew.
Resting at the base of the package was something
which initially was vaguely familiar but then became dreadfully unmistakable.
It was the clawed up remnant of the girl's hand he'd excitedly held on to that
night. Accompanying it was one her ears, her bloated tongue, her shrunken
heart, one of her eyes which still stared surprisingly into the cold vacuum of
death and a note. The note read;
With the hand that led you forth into this adversity,
We have brought you these tidings.
With thy eyes, you have seen no evil.
With thy ears, you have heard no evil.
With thy tongue, you shall speak no evil.
With thy owlish heart, you will surely heed,
for we are watching.
The threat was unmistakable
and the message had been crystal clear. He was determined to
forget the memories of the gruesome past just to appease them, for there was
his mother and a home he could now never leave. With the memories of his dark
experience weighing him down, he struggled to go back to sleep but his eyes
dared not shut. He
was now bound to the living and the dead, a beacon to the nocturnal and a
repellant to the diurnal. The corruptible stench of death dogged his every
action, for the stench never leaves you once it has grazed you. It never leaves
for death never forgets, just like an old Polaroid photograph, it remembers all
that it has seductively stroked and forever leeches on their tortured soul.
When sleep finally came, the last thing he saw was the
distorted, yet human face of the creature as it drank from the chalice that
night. The distinctive and unmistakable face of his step father, Pedro Azevedo,
and a cold shiver of dread sprawled through his spine.
Evil had
indeed been invited into his home





You are too dark aha
ReplyDeleteNot my fault sir :(
DeleteOh my, I knew he saw someone he knew though. I feel as if the story is incomplete, left me with that kind of feeling.
ReplyDeleteReally? What did you think was missing?
DeleteI had d same feel..it ended too abrupt..know u were gng for the 'shock twist'..bt too abrupt I guess..still like sha!
DeleteWhn I read your stuff I feel like writing something dark..and killing. -__-
LOL! Please whenever you write it just copy me or something..
DeleteThanks for dropping by.. :)
*sigh*
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful. As in beautiful. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteThank you sir :D
Deletei freaking love it. i wish i could write like this tho. y u no teach me? :(
ReplyDeleteSori na. Will do soon :(
Delete9c piece, although I knew twas someone he knew
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as always. But i could think of an alternative ending...which would have added to the gloom. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteOh really? Do share your alternate ending, might even borrow it for any of my next stories that fit it... :)
DeleteMaybe later. Time'll tell, and Omo, maybe we'll do some work together very soon, too...I'ld love so much.
DeleteNo problem.. Would be a pleasure.. Just hit me up on twitter whenever you want us to do something together :)
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